Tuesday, April 19, 2011

Captain Pip

Today, I am actually going to write in a specific style!  Villanelle.


A Villanelle is a nineteen-line poem consisting of a very specific rhyming scheme: aba aba aba aba aba abaa.

The first and the third lines in the first stanza are repeated in alternating order throughout the poem, and appear together in the last two lines. 

                         


The brave young captain of a sinking ship
Planted on deck, facing the storm
Stands and waits with a strong hand-grip


The voyage he took, this long trip
Was meant to speak of the fame of
The brave young a captain of a sinking ship

Adventure awaited, unaware the black rip
Facing instead a storm of such power, he
Sits and waits with a strong hand-grip


Working through terror sailors slide and slip
While he frets and ponders their doom
The brave young captain of a sinking ship

The seas never releasing her grip
The mast cracked and buckled, still he
Sits and waits with a strong hand-grip


The lightening flashes, cracking like a whip
The seas have taken the Merchant so
The brave young captain of a sinking ship
Sits and waits with a strong hand-grip

1 comment:

Serenity said...

Oooo....I like this one. Very well done. And kudos on trying different types of poetry.