Tuesday, April 26, 2011

The Ride

Words I must use:  a balloon, smoke, and a keyhole
Style:  Fib.  Use the Fibonacci pattern for syllables.  Basically.  Yes.




Look
see
the smoke
through the door
the ancient keyhole
eye pressed mouth agape, can't believe
a little mouse flying a bright blue hot-air balloon 
Contrived by during the time of

2 comments:

LadyDraconix said...

I think this may be one of my favorites yet! The limited use of words and their relation to each other - the line breaks - evoke such amazing images.

Also. You rock.

April 26, 2011 at 1:07 PM
Unknown said...

I agree with Aprille... you rock! I love the imagery and it flows so nicely. Love love love this poem.

April 26, 2011 at 7:19 PM

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